On page 14 of 24 is this paragraph:


> 7.1 Overview
>
> This section describes the specification of well-behaved JAF-aware JavaBean™
> viewers. Note that this proposal the reader is comfortable with the JavaBeans™
> Specification. ...


The sentence starting "Note that this proposal the reader..." seems to
be missing the word "assumes", as in "Note that this proposal assumes
the reader".

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In the section 10.4 that shows the MailcapCommandMap:

// get all know commands for this MIME type
public CommandInfo[] getAllCommands(String mimeType);

The word "know" should be "known".

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Hi. I'm reading version 1.0 dated March 16, 1998. In Section 5.1, page
4 of 24, is a bullet list. The second entry is:

o Getting the Command List: The application presents command list for a
selected data item.

To be consistent with the first and third entries, I think the second
entry needs the word "the". I think the second entry should read:

o Getting the Command List: The application presents the command list
for a selected data item.


bill.shannon@Eng 1998-09-04
And more...

On page 3 of 24, in the section "3.4 The Command Object Interface",
is this sentence:

> JAF-aware JavaBean™ can directly access their DataSource and
> DataHandler objects in order to retrieve the data type,
> and to act on the data.

There's a sungular-plural agreement problem there. I'd also lose the
comma. I'd suggest writing it like this:

> A JAF-aware JavaBean™ can directly access its DataSource and
> DataHandler objects in order to retrieve the data type
> and act on the data.


Subject: Typos in jaf/docs/javax.activation.CommandMap.html

Hi. Hope I haven't reported these before; I've sent a few reports. ;-)


1) In the Method Detail section covering GetDefaultCommandMap is this
bullet:

"In cases where no CommandMap has been set, the CommandMap creates an
instance of MailcapCommandMap and set that to the default, returning its
value."

I think that should be reworded to say: "...and *sets* that to the
default, ..."


2) In the Method Detail section for GetCommand is:

"Get the default command corresonding to the MIME type."

That word should be "corresponding".


3) In the Method Detail section for getPreferredCommands is:

"Returns:
          the CommandInfo classes the represent the command Beans."

It should say "... classes *that* represent ..."



Subject: Typos in jaf/docs/javax.activation.CommandInfo.html

Hello again...

Sorry, in my previous message about CommandMap, I forgot to say that
I've got JAF 1.0.

Here are a couple of typos in the CommandInfo page.


1) The following sentence in the first paragraph has two problems:

"There is also method that will return the class name of the class that
implements the command..."

First, the sentence should start "There is also *a* method..."

Second, I think that "class name of the class" is sort of redundant.
How about just "name of the class"?


2) Several places through the page is the word "instansiated"; it's
mixed in with "instantiated". I think that the first spelling is wrong
and the second is right.