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  2. JDK-6228305

confusing ungrammatical wording in javax.management.monitor.Monitor doc.

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      A DESCRIPTION OF THE PROBLEM :
      Some of the wording is ungrammatical (and therefore confusing):

      1. The Monitor class description begins:

         Defines the common part to all monitor MBeans.

      That should be either:

         Defines the part common to all monitor MBeans.

      or

         Defines the common part of all monitor MBeans

      (or other options).


      2. The "server" field documentation begins:

         Reference on the MBean server.

      That should be:

         Reference to the MBean server.


      DSB/FGM



      EXPECTED VERSUS ACTUAL BEHAVIOR :
      EXPECTED -
      See Description section.
      ACTUAL -
      See Description section.

      URL OF FAULTY DOCUMENTATION :
      http://java.sun.com/j2se/1.5.0/docs/api/javax/management/monitor/Monitor.html#server
      ###@###.### 2005-2-11 16:51:13 GMT

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            lmalvent Luis-Miguel Alventosa (Inactive)
            gmanwanisunw Girish Manwani (Inactive)
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